This took me over 3 years to make and it was 48 minutes long so I cut it down to 17:30 to make it a Short Film. Bruce The Blueberry Moose
A surreal and sometimes poetic journey with nice set design and some interesting visuals. The sound could use some attention as much of the voice overs compete with music and sound effects and are often very difficult to understand. In the future you may also want to consider more mid range and close up camera shots to pull the viewer into the scenes (particularly dialog scenes). So much of the action is shot wide to seemingly see all of the sets which is not always effective to the viewer. Keep at it!
WOW. My first response to anything i have done. All of those points you made I greatly appreciate.
I am aware of all of what you said and I ma still new to AI and some of the audio has music and the walking so I am competing with that as well.
I agree about those camera camera shots and sometimes my camera prompts don’t work as well as I would like but things are improving with AI.
I have about 100 characters I designed in CC5 and they give me a unique look in the AI in OpenArt AI and the Higgsfield AI I am using along side with Reallusion CC5 and iCLone8. I have a camera and I will be doing videos of me or others talking and then I will try to use those tools to get better vocals.
The links I put in the forum post here is ‘Bruce the Blueberry Moose’ and my HitFilm changed company was sold and I lost over 3 years of work making it non longer editable. They won’t even let me re-install my perpetual license and they destroyed my 3 years of editing in HitFilm.
Out of a negative came a positive and for the past 8 months I have been using DaVinci Resolve Studio and I am glad I got that last year just in case this would happen.
I am 66 learning as I go and I am the only ma doing this and learning as I go.
Man, you valuable detailed criticism is well appreciated. and I thank you for that.
I you made these comments for the my first ever 3D fully animated in Reallusion ‘Bruce’ then I understand exactly everything you said.
My new film Pierre-Pierre I lost my work again. I will backup more often now that I know how to. Self learning is tough at my age but it’s something to do.
Have a nice day Bud 
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