I am aware that i probably will not meet the highest quality standart yet, but i am quite proud about this little photoshooting scene. In my opinion the eyes came out quite well. CC452 and IC852 BTW thats me on the left 
Criticism welcome !
Well, IMO the different styles of the characters clash a bit: The male (you) is far more realistic looking (except for the outfit, which is a little stylized) while Lara is a stylized/cartoonish looking character.
To make it work better, you may want to either make the male more stylized or Lara more realistic. Unless, of course, the point was to have semi-realistic “you” pose with a toon character.
The male’s eyes look fine, Lara’s a bit weird because the visual separation of pupil and iris is pretty much non-existent. However, the eyes are not the first thing I notice: Lara’s hair is what bothers me most about her character. I would at least use regular iClone hair and not this low-poly toon look. Especially when we are talking about a still, the difference in computational performance should be a non-issue.
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Thanks for your statement !
To make it work better, you may want to either make the male more stylized or Lara more realistic.
I really should try that i think. I experment a lot with static scenes and game characters, here i wanted to be together with “Lara” one time. You are absolutely right, too cartoonish, but i modeled her with Headshot 2 and she looked so cute to me the way came out. I may try both, making her more realistic and another one with me more cartoonish.
That is fine. But you were asking for (constructive) criticism so I obliged. 
BTW: the forum has a quotation function. Just saying…
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I am very thankful for any constructive respone as well as any just do or dont like .
… Though I must admit englisch is not my native language so i may express things sometimes in an unsuitable way. I also may not understand responses the way they were meant as well (sadly).
Hello Digital lara looks like the first gameplays of Lara Croft. Want to see more,
do you have a trailer.
AI assisted translations are impressively good these days and may help with more difficult nuances of the language. That being said, I think you are doing fine.
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Yes shes from an early game, sculpted her head with Headshot 2. TBH i dont really have a concept, i dont develop games or so, just love to mess about with game characters and learn how to do things, rather static scenes then animations. Always with a slight humor in it i hope. I got two little slightly clunky animations below to look at for a lough…
“Never mess with an Assaultron” and “Laras Revenge” 