Hard Rain at Midnite Auto

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Not bad. :slight_smile:

A few observations, though:

  • You made the effort to animate the clocks in the video, but at least the one in the radio station studio is not keeping time correctly.
  • Personally, I don’t think real photographs (i.e. not renders) should be used in an animation that is somewhat stylized; I find the contrast a bit jarring.
  • The rule in film making is usually “show, don’t tell”. Some parts of the action of the story that is being narrated you show, others not (at least not what is being described in the narrative); I’m assuming, for example hanging the guy from the hoist and some of the other stuff would have been difficult to animate.
  • There are some inconsistencies between the narration and what is being shown, e.g. after torching the place, Sunny lights a cigarette while the narrator has her a do a line of the white stuff.

Maybe I missed it, but who put out the fire and ended Rick?